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darlingfox) wrote2005-11-10 09:25 pm
darlingfox) wrote2005-11-10 09:25 pm
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YYH drabble
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aedictus inspires viridian_magpie to write this which in turn inspires me to write a companion piece for it.
191 words
HxH, KxK, and yet it's all about HxK
I suppose I should warn of a kink or two. Or three.
NC-17 so if you're not old enough, don't read.
Disclaimer: Yu Yu Hakusho © Yoshihiro Togashi. All characters depicted in sexual situations are fictional and are above the age of eighteen, regardless of what age these characters may be in the material they are derived from.
He has completely forgotten the rough branch he settled on some time ago. He doesn’t care of the rain that glues his bangs to his face and soaks his clothes. He’s never cold and the fingers stroking his swollen cock make everything else irrelevant.
Everything else except the figure writhing inside, tangled on the sheets, vines crawling around him.
A mere window can’t prevent him from hearing the occasional, barely audible whimper. Shivers run down his body and he has to bite his lip to hold back a moan. Keen eyes follow the vines, observing how they pinch a nipple, slide across a pale skin, twine around a leaking cock.
The desire is burning hotter now, salty sweat mixing with falling raindrops and a hand twisting just so. Inside, the pale hips are moving faster, pushing against the sheets and vines, fingers clasping both. He is panting now, watching how the slender back arches and waiting. Finally, spilling on the bed, on himself, on the vines, Kurama moans and in that desperate sound is his name.
And Hiei shudders and comes, too, as silent as ever, blood running from his bruised lip.
aedictus inspires viridian_magpie to write this which in turn inspires me to write a companion piece for it.191 words
HxH, KxK, and yet it's all about HxK
I suppose I should warn of a kink or two. Or three.
NC-17 so if you're not old enough, don't read.
Disclaimer: Yu Yu Hakusho © Yoshihiro Togashi. All characters depicted in sexual situations are fictional and are above the age of eighteen, regardless of what age these characters may be in the material they are derived from.
He has completely forgotten the rough branch he settled on some time ago. He doesn’t care of the rain that glues his bangs to his face and soaks his clothes. He’s never cold and the fingers stroking his swollen cock make everything else irrelevant.
Everything else except the figure writhing inside, tangled on the sheets, vines crawling around him.
A mere window can’t prevent him from hearing the occasional, barely audible whimper. Shivers run down his body and he has to bite his lip to hold back a moan. Keen eyes follow the vines, observing how they pinch a nipple, slide across a pale skin, twine around a leaking cock.
The desire is burning hotter now, salty sweat mixing with falling raindrops and a hand twisting just so. Inside, the pale hips are moving faster, pushing against the sheets and vines, fingers clasping both. He is panting now, watching how the slender back arches and waiting. Finally, spilling on the bed, on himself, on the vines, Kurama moans and in that desperate sound is his name.
And Hiei shudders and comes, too, as silent as ever, blood running from his bruised lip.
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muahaha.
... *reads*
*licks lips*
mmmmm yum.
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*then is nitpicky* third paragraph, typo: "to bite his lip"
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I'm suddenly pondering if one can write NC-17 smut in 100 words. I just might try that...
*then is nitpicky* third paragraph, typo: "to bite his lip"
Ha, I knew I missed something when I changed the tense. Works better like this than in imperfect, me thinks.
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Very, very, very hawt. *purrs* Nice way to make someone's evening.
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You should be flattered. Just think how
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**fans self**
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Btw, would you mind if I'd friend you? I actually went and read Island in one sitting and - of course - loved it. The characterisations are wonderful which is rare in an AU fic and the whole story is so beautiful. Angsty, sensual, heartbreaking and beautiful. The third chapter left me agreeing with Kurama re: Hiei's aura (we want him, they want him, everybody wants him), and wanting a stuffed dragon of my own.
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I'm so happy that you read my story and liked it. I have found a love of writing again, and it's so great that I can post what I write and get feedback from others (when I was writing in high school in the 80s, there was no internet, and I was under the impression that I was alone in my cartoon fanficiton writing.)
As long as you don't mind my rants and daily bishonen pics - please, go ahead and friend!
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Fanfiction (and Hiei, can't forget him) connects people. Sort of strange when you think about it... But really, in RL I don't know anyone else who'd write it. Then again, I don't go around advertising it either.
As long as you don't mind my rants and daily bishonen pics
You mean there's someone who minds? Weird. *g*
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Your icon = ♥ *dies laughing*
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HXK=weakness
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Hiei/Kurama is my favourite 'ship in YYH and it's always nice to see that others like it, too.