I loved the Malfoy family's concern for each other and each other only, too. It was... cute. And Molly's pwnage and Neville and Kreacher's saucepan, as well.

I never believed I'd say this but Snape, for the love of god, get a life.
Okay, I lol'd at that. Snape was just a sad geek with a bit of a mean streak. D: I had a bit of an issue with Snape/Lily, myself, but I'm not sure if it's the portrayal of the crush or the very idea of it that rubbed me the wrong way. Something just...did.

And the epilogue was stupid and, yes, Dumbledore/Grindelwald was, as you said, practically text.